Wednesday, April 3, 2013


While Marlin was sitting on the rock unhappily, Dory came along and said in a cute voice, “ Hey Mr Grumpy Gills when life gets you down, you know what you gotta do? ,” Marlin replied grumpily “ I don’t want to know what you gotta do. “
Dory sings and sing until Marlin yelled with a frown on his face, “Dory no singing. “
“ I love to swim, when you want to swim, “ Dory sang happily while grabbing his fin and taking him down into the deep dark ocean.
Marlin yelled angrily, “ See now I’m gonna get stuck now with that song now it’s in my head. ”
“Sorry. ” Dory answered.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Zion
    I just wanted to say I love your story, and you put the speech marks in the right place and I also like what you said in your story I really liked it. Keep up the great work Zion.....
    By Senolita


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