Thursday, September 27, 2012

STOMACH CHURNING


It was a really great day, I felt like going with my 2 youngest sister and my oldest sister, to go to the roller coaster. So then we went after the 10 lot of people. The roller coaster went as fast as it could when it went around the big loop. We were next I almost fell when we zoomed down the steep  coaster. After that I fell when we were at the big loop. We fell in a Milo packet, a big one. Then we fell back down and we landed back in the car, where the roller coaster was.
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  1. TuruhiraNovember 26, 2012 at 9:35 AM

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    From:Turuhira

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