tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-207391468586473700.post2676710034041281059..comments2013-12-16T20:50:44.155+13:00Comments on Zion : MY GREATEST ADVENTUREPES Blogs 2013 Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043164228733682681noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-207391468586473700.post-14730598867766896902011-11-29T14:37:52.815+13:002011-11-29T14:37:52.815+13:00Hello Zion!
I am Dominique Spence, a student in t...Hello Zion!<br /><br />I am Dominique Spence, a student in the United States at the University of South Alabama. It is located in Mobile, Alabama. Your story about Aliens is very interesting! Your imagination is vivid and creative. Writing your own story is really fun because you make it about what ever you like. You were very descriptive which allowed me to see the story in my mind as you told it. Not only did you do a good job telling the story but you did a good job typing it on your blog also. At your age I did not have as much access to a computer. We did most of our work on paper with a pencil. It is very good that you are able to use a computer for learning and as a way to complete your work. Where did the inspiration to write about aliens come from? Do you ever leave Saturn or do you decide to stay? Great job and I look forward to seeing more of your blogs.Dominique Spencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00695021086406198652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-207391468586473700.post-33650362992497416532011-11-16T17:45:13.001+13:002011-11-16T17:45:13.001+13:00Hey Zion,
My name is Stephanie and I am a student...Hey Zion, <br />My name is Stephanie and I am a student at the University of South Alabama located in Mobile, Alabama where I am studying to be a teacher. I loved reading your story about your adventure to Saturn. It would be fun to snowboard around the ring of Saturn. You had a very creative story and were very descriptive with your word choice. The story of your adventure come to life in my head and I could picture each scene that you were describing. Keep up your good use of descriptive words.stephann90https://www.blogger.com/profile/07664887282919712635noreply@blogger.com